Week 9 - News Story Recording and Reflection

This week exercise was the write a draft a script for a news story stemming from my maiden speech for election as state parliament representative for the Capricorn Coast. I drafted and recorded my speech. On reflection I feel that as a whole it was ok. 

The dialog for the speech worked and flowed well. It could be found on a local news radio or television station. It introduced the story and highlighted the candidate’s values as well as used other people to support the candidate’s views. 

The reading of the script was good. It was clear and mostly well paced, however I did stumble over some words. I was originally having a lot of trouble pronouncing the work ‘electoral’ and focused so much on getting the pronunciation of this word correct it distracted me and mispronounced other words and didn’t pause as much as I should have. It was a good test run and draft and with these things considered should make the final speech run far better.  

Draft speech recording: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yNL-4tsdQIY